This is your penultimate draft.

Aim to get at least 2 other media aware students to watch it with you. Film yourselves watching it and have a conversation about it. Stop and ask them for feedback on certain aspects – do they like the filter and if not why not? Does the narrative make sense? What about the star image?

Then edit it together and up load it as your last piece of feedback.

The final version for the home page, has to be uploaded within the month so you can tweak it if the 4th draft feedback throws up any issues.