A New Improved DPS
New and improved article
Changes and reasons
In my second draft of this article, I have many changes and have reached my targets set from the first draft. All these changes have made a significant impact on the article as the colours work well along with the fonts to speak out to the target audience.
I have cut down the article significantly and now have more space to edit and give a bigger impact of the article that is present on the page. By having more negative space in the double-page spread it makes the reader much less overwhelmed and more likely to read the article.
I have then changed the one-page background to a red colour with the SharpShoot initials in the background presented in a light black so that the article is still legible, by having the changes in colour it relaxes the reader and looks more inviting with the separate colours.
I have added in another image of the directors of the company, to have them looking directly at the reader reinforces the power they have in the Kpop industry, on the main image I have placed their names below each director in the photo to show the reader who they are and how high their status is.
In addition, I have removed the sharpshoot logo and title to the top of the second so that it once again shows readers who they are reading about, at the end of the second page I have placed a small red triangle that tells readers that the article continues onto the next page. For the subtitles of each section of the article, the letters have a stroke in blue to make them stand out, even more, to give a stronger more powerful effect.
There are also quotes from both men in bold black and red to draw readers in as they will want to know where the quote has come from and why it is so significant in the article, I have rearranged the layout of the article and it has improved significantly from the first draft and really speaks out to teen girls as they want to know where their favourite stars and idols come from.
What’s new?
- Page colours
- Fonts
- Letters
- Background
- Images
- Layout
- Names