Draft article

Below is my first draft of my article. As a first article it should contain interesting images and enticing sub titles for the sub articles, I like that I have added a quick response code at the end of the the article so that readers can go onto the SharpShoot website. I also like the touch of the company’s logo in the corner of the photo as it shows recognition of the company and it is very distinct so people will be able to remember it as it will stick in their minds.

However, I think that the article is too packed into the page and it looks very intense making readers want to skip over to the next page, in my next draft I will not have the whole article in the double page spread. I will make the quotes from the article stand out so that readers will read them and want to read more of the article, by adding some more images within the article it will give readers for context of the article and a better image of the directors of this company. I would like to add more negative space to the article pages to make it look much less intense and more chill so that it makes readers want to read the article and not feel to overwhelmed with the double page spread.

As an article it should include some drop capitals and bright bold colours to interest audiences, the by line in the article should be bold so the writer and photographer get proper credit for their work. The paragraphs should be spread out and easy to read for everyone, there could be photos within the article to separate the article to make it look more interesting. The headline is what makes the reader want to read the article as it is the first thing they will see when looking at the double page spread, a stand first gives the reader information of the article to interest them into reading it.