Second draft of contents page

Below is my second and final draft of my contents page and I am very pleased with the outcome, I have edited it so that all the previous targets have been addressed in this draft to make it the most effective it can be.

I have changed the format of the photo so that it stands out more and looks much more effective against the purple and blue background, the black borders give a deeper sense of urgency for the audience to look into the KDREAM group. The words going over the image really call out to the reader as the words look like they are coming out of the image at the reader, the size difference in each image gives a 3D effect making the members seem like they are present in the contents page.

The changes in the caption articles within the fonts and colours make them stand out to the reader and look very inviting to them, the page numbers have been put into blocks reinforcing the idea of the 3D effect making the articles seem more appealing.

In conclusion, I am pleased with the second draft of my contents page and think that it is effective towards teenage girls, the whole page jumps out at the reader possibly seeming a little overwhelming at first but mainly effective and resulting in a reaction of surprise and excitement to the contents of the magazine.

Peer assessment 

Voice recording

Targets

• Add page numbers
• Fewer fonts
• Maybe remove underlining of contents