FEEDBACK AND TARGETS:

• Editing needs to be much quicker – at the moment, it drags on too long and it doesn’t quite have the anarchic feel that ska requires
• Narrative parts need to be linked much better as some things remain confusing and questions have been created. The contract with the demographic has not been fulfilled.
• The camera relies too much on the mid and long shots. Close ups are required on the instruments, especially the saxophone, as they are the basis. The point of a video is to show talent.
• Our setting and our costumes are on point, as such it is unnecessary to fix these.
• The video needs more dynamism.