In this draft I have included all of the separated montage narrative that makes up the majority of the 3rd 3rd of the music video. It also includes a rough-cut of the confusion chorus edit that consists mostly of rapid closeups.

From completing this draft I now feel that I could have done with filming one more narrative shoot to get the final pieces of footage that I need to make the video look more whole.

Below is and embedded version of my draft 2 for the video please watch.