In draft 2 a lot more footage has been added and the video is now it full length at 3 minutes 23 seconds. To fill in blank spaces we have put a whole single performance from our performer across the whole video. This also saved time as it meant that we only have to lip sync that clip once rather than on multiple different occasions.

We got a variety of different feedback for our draft 2. Some positive and some negative. The start of the video was liked as the pace of the edit is fast and interesting. However, because the pace of the edit at the beginning is fast it is very easy to see how much the rest of the video needs to speed up.  Long shots need to be shortened and some need to be removed completely.

Another piece of feedback that we have found interesting and feel with further our product a lot is that the fight scene is not long enough and need more emphasis. Because of this we have revisited the draft, upon looking again we agree with this statement and have decided that we are going to go on another shoot and film a fight scene that does the narrative more justice.

Targets for draft 2;

• To re-shoot the fight scene
• Speed up the pace of the edit to match or surpass the first section
• Delete and repeated sequences that have been included
• Shorten the performance shots
• Edit movement into the performance section to make it more interesting
• Include a wider variety of shots