For our first draft of our advert we thought it would be appropriate and productive for us to collect feedback to see if we had come up with a suitable design that we could tweak.

A lot of the feedback that we received was very positive. From the voice recorded feedback we have managed to pull out some targets for areas to improve on for our next draft.

Targets:

• Fill up the black black space
• Increase the size of the image on the page
• Replace the logos at the bottom of the page with a higher resolution version
• Make sure that everything is centred and perfectly in line
• Fix the star rating on the page so that it does not look tacky.