Since draft 2 we have progressed with our music video quite a lot. We have been doing precise editing and have decided that an opening to the video would be beneficial. We are going to ask for feedback especially on the opening to see what the audiences opinion is on it and whether they think it contributes well to the rest of the video.

Furthermore, we have started adding more shots in to make the pace of the edit faster as it has been requested in feedback we have received in previous drafts. The faster pace makes the video more enjoyable to watch and makes it more exciting. An example of where we have edited a faster pace in would be roughly 1.58 minutes in. This is the second chorus of the song and a part that has noticeably improved since draft 2

Overall, I am happy with our progression from draft 2 to draft 3 and hope to have the whole of verse 2 precisely edited by draft 4.