2nd Draft Of Music Video
Above is Draft 2 of our music video. The video has an extensive variety of shots and we feel that the overall look worked for the mise-en-scene, and the genre. This addition of the narrative in this draft helped us within the video as it adds to our star image of our star being ruthless which is the image we want to portray in the video
Targets for improvement –
- We could look at adding the rest of the narrative finishing the story within the video.
- We could cut quicker on the performance as some of the shots feel long and drawn out which makes the overall video look dull.
- There could be more dolly and panning shots and add a different element in the performance to combine the narrative and performance together for the fished video.