Complete Magazine Draft 3
Bellow is my 3rd draft of my magazine. It is very near completion but still has a few tweaks to be made. I feel like I have come on really far with what I have stated with and have learnt lots of important things during the process of doing this project.
Below are my draft three’s
To make my magazine the best it can be I got some feedback on what I have done well and what I can improve on from my teacher. The link to this Recorded conversation is below…
Click on the photo to listen
From this recording somethings that I need to change and improve on my draft three are…
Front cover
- move the price and date around on the front cover
- make sure the mast head is not completely covered by my star image
- maybe add a cover line somewhere at the top of the front cover
Contents page
- make sure all of the writing is the same size for page references
- check if the page number is in the center of the column
- remove the dashes in the article information
- get a closer up photo of Ollie
Double page spread
- make sure they is space around the texts boxes of writing
- remove the dashes in the article
- try to sort out the sub line on the bottom of the first page
- reword the end of the article leading into the next pages
- think about changing the color of the writing in the article.
I feel this is a good way of getting some criticism on my magazine. It has helped point out some changes on it that I would have not noticed because someone else is able to have a look at it. If I make these changes I feel like this will be the finale piece in making my magazine and then it will hopefully done and i can add it into flipsnack with my adverts