Digipak draft 2
I am happy with the changes we have made between the first and second draft of digipak. I and the rest of the group think we have made good progress towards the finishing product with only a few small things to change and it will ready. Below is the second draft of the digipak.
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The main changes from the first draft
- We have moved the band name on the front cover to the center of the page
- We have changed the look of the band name. By adding some effects and using the colour palette to the font/typeface to give it a bit more pop.
- Not much has changed on the inside covers just a few small positing tweaks to the photos
- We have fixed the background of the back cover as there were two different types of black showing.
- The Album name has been put on each side of the back cover as this will fold to the sides of the CD cover.
Teacher feedback from draft 1
Things that we did well……
- Great concept
- Good Mise en scene
- Depth of field is good on the inside right bringing out the sharp focus and colours
- Brilliant photos and shots
Things that can be improved for the next draft…
- Reposition the ‘turning tides’ writing closer to the middle and enlarge
- Change the colour of the band name
- Make the track list easier to see. Maybe put a ring around each song ?
- Add a frame around the cover photo
- On the inside left have more of the star image in the picture to show how it is
- Add the spines on the back cover
- Sort the copyright and barcode on the back page
Reflection
Draft two has been very successful. The tweaks that we have done from the first draft in the graphic and colour palette hopefully show more of the typical conventions of a album in our style of genre. This means in terms of the Brand it is represented more through the star image/ band in the photos.