DPS DRAFT 1

Above I have added my first double page spread draft. for my music magazine based around emo rap with my article written in. I asked one of my peers to give me feed back in order for me to make second draft and use the points brought up by my peer.

  • Make her bigger and manipulate in photoshop – more contrast
  • stand first in bigger font and bolder
  • then a drop capital for where the article starts
  • wouldn’t normally say Page…just the number
  • not sure about Rosen….too blurry…make it extra blurrywind in photoshop? and move him higher as wasted space at the top…perhaps sharpen the name Rosen to stand out?
  • anchor the main image…who is she?
  • byline – who wrote it and who did the photography?

 

 

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