Here is my second DPS for my music magazine based around the m rap genre with a article written by me. Using the peer assessment give to me last draft is made the design better and more eye catching for the audience. Below I have include and third peer assessment for me to us on my next DPS draft, in order for me to make the product the best it can be.

Peer assessment:

• make her larger
• could you add a quote on his or her picture?
• the drop capital is where the article starts as your stand first i.e. your opening para needs to be in a larger and bolder font, then you get the drop capital
• separate the byline from the caption in the inset
• page 6 in red too?
• pull the copy away from the edge of the black column
• why not justify the copy right and left
• still not convinced by the wider column of copy at the bottom