Above I have added my first double page spread draft. for my music magazine based around emo rap with my article written in. I asked one of my peers to give me feed back in order for me to make second draft and use the points brought up by my peer.
- Make her bigger and manipulate in photoshop – more contrast
- stand first in bigger font and bolder
- then a drop capital for where the article starts
- wouldn’t normally say Page…just the number
- not sure about Rosen….too blurry…make it extra blurrywind in photoshop? and move him higher as wasted space at the top…perhaps sharpen the name Rosen to stand out?
- anchor the main image…who is she?
- byline – who wrote it and who did the photography?