Here is my second DPS for my music magazine based around the m rap genre with a article written by me. Using the peer assessment give to me last draft is made the design better and more eye catching for the audience. Below I have include and third peer assessment for me to us on my next DPS draft, in order for me to make the product the best it can be.
Peer assessment:
- make her larger
- could you add a quote on his or her picture?
- the drop capital is where the article starts as your stand first i.e. your opening para needs to be in a larger and bolder font, then you get the drop capital
- separate the byline from the caption in the inset
- page 6 in red too?
- pull the copy away from the edge of the black column
- why not justify the copy right and left
- still not convinced by the wider column of copy at the bottom