This is draft 3 for our music video with peer feedback:

what works well:

• strong variety of locations
• good use of camera angles
• good editing techniques which work well for the music videos genre.
• good narrative order with a wide variety of shots

What can be improved:

• Change up the editing process (don’t use the same editing approach for a lengthy period of time).
• When there are text on the screen, the green screen effect has to be fixed.
• clear out any ambiguity in the music video’s purpose/narrative.
• retake shaky shots.

since the 2 draft:

The story and performance have been bolstered by the addition of new characters and settings. New effects and transitions have been added to help the clips blend together better in the same editing format. We’ll be reshooting a lot of the performance for improved clarity and overall quality in the next shoot.