First draft of Content Page
CONTENTS PAGE PEER ASSESSMENT
What type of shots have been used to create a variety of shot distances and how has the camera been used to communicate meaning?
- There has been a mid shot used that communicates the meaning of joyfulness and welcomes the reader into reading it.
What choice of Mise en scene is appropriate for the star image and genre?
- I think that the appropriate Mise en scene for the star image and genre is costume as it’s very important to include this as it helps to convey the genre.
How far is the font used readable and reflects the genre?
- The font is very clear and easy to read, it also reflects the genre as it seem bubbly and fun conveying the genre.
What technical conventions of a Contents page are present and used effectively?
- The technical conventions of a content page that are present are the cover lines, numbers and headlines that are used effectively to draw in the audience.
How has Indesign been used to layout the page to convey a brand?
- Indesign has been used to create a consistent theme and similar layout throughout the magazine.
How well have the text and visuals been integrated together?
- The font of the text has been used the same throughout the magazine. Some of the text matches certain colours within the visuals making it all come together.
Where has photoshop been used to manipulate the photos to enhance the star image or genre?
- Photoshop hasn’t been used to manipulate the photos, this could be something to consider when making the real one.
How is the language used appropriate for the genre and target audience?
- The language used is emphasised to create a fun and friendly feel linking back to the genre which makes it appropriate for the audience.
Good, really well, very strong, very conventional, fabulous, really well applied, really dynamic, very clear. LEVEL 5
*Clearly, strong, good, satisfactory, conventional, well good sense TOP LEVEL 4*
Fails to convey, lacks, insufficient, minimal, satisfactory, functional, adequate, staid LOW LEVEL 4/ TOP LEVEL 3
5 Improvements for my Contents Page
- Use photoshop to make my image more defined.
- Try to be more creative with the layout.
- Make the headlines more catchy.
- Maybe position image differently.
- Maybe use less fonts.