Draft 3 Front Cover

Things I changed from draft 2 to 3

• I made the eye brighter – I made them more blue and the white more vibrant.
• I also made her teeth whiter.
• I de-blemished her using photoshop as well.
• I added a bit of sparkle to her top.
• Added more cover lines to fill in gaps.
• Made the pug a little smaller and moved it.
• Added in the genre of music.
• Moved the date to the top.
• Added some orange text.
•  Moved the barcode to the right side.

Draft 3 Contents Page

Things I changed from draft 2 to 3

• I rearranged the text and images to make it feel a little less squashed. To this I removed and image and a page number.
• I made ‘CONENTS’ bolder to make it stand out.
• I gave the actual page a page number.
• I wrote the names of the people in the insets.
• Got rid of an image so that there wasn’t two of the same artist.
• Moved the orange lines so that it didn’t look like a flag and to fill in empty space.
• Changed the sense of ‘tour dates’ box.

Draft 3 DPS

Things I changed from draft 2 to 3

• Made the title more bold.
• Spread everything out so it’s not so squashed.
• De-blemished her on photoshop.
• Moved the insets.
• Got rid of the empty space.
• Added text related to insets.

Feedback from Draft 3

Reflection – Front cover

• I need to sort out my cover lines around her hands and make sure the middle doesn’t overlap her hand. Also make them all capital letters.
• Smaller spaces between the cover lines.
• Make Freya Rose cover lines bigger and move more to the right so the jewellery can be seen.
• Add price and re position barcode.
• Move everything further away from the spine.
• Move ‘reeze’ part of Breeze further up.

Reflection – Contents Page

• Move the titles for the images inside the box and add the page number for where that artist is featured.
• Make titles bigger and boxes closer together.
• Edit page number from 2 to 3.
• Add something along the long line on the cross.

For my final contents, I think I will go back to the layout of my original contents page as I have realised I prefer and fits better with the theme of my magazine.

Reflection – Double Page Spread

• Make stand first bigger.
• Move drop capital to where the article starts.
• Make questions a different font and/or colour.
• Delete hyphens.
• Too crowded.
• Make titles fir images different colours or font and make them shorter.
• Correct page number.