This is our draft 3. We sent this draft to our peers to gain some feedback from them.

Peer Feedback

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Reflection

Overall we are proud of our settings, mes en scene and range of shots and I think our peers would agree. However we still have things to edit such as:

• Editing all lip syncing perfectly to the beat
• Cut out background on some images
• Make some clips shorter

Images from shoot 3

Reflection

After a lot more planning for this shoot, we chose a different setting and a reason as to why our star doesn’t like her body. After watching back the videos from this shoot, we realised we’d made the right decision to re-do our narrative as these clips were a lot better and clear as to what the narrative is. Although is some shots the lighting could have been a little bit better, we were pleased with the range of MES EN SCENE we used.

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