Draft 5

I have added my article to my DPS and sorted it out so it looks nice. In addition, I put an arrow signifying that the article continues on to the next page as I wasn’t able to fit it all on one page. On my contents page, I added more hearts which continue my theme of cute and girly. Finally, I changed their names into a more English style so the readers are able to read it.

Peer Feedback

After receiving feed back from a peer, I am able to have an understanding what needs to be changed and what new to put in. They have also given me positive feedback so I know what is good. This helps me change my magazine to make it look the best I can.

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