My Double Page Spread first draft:
Improvements to make:
- Move pull quote.
- Can’t have black text on the railing.
- Center text.
- Space out the colour, so I have bits of red all over the DPS.
My Double Page Spread after making some changes:
- I’ve added the red bar at the bottom to spread out the colour a little bit more because it was all clumped into one area.
- I’ve moved my black text away from the railing that it was on before, when the text was on the railing it was barely readable.
- I’ve moved my pull quote down to beneath the first columns, I have done this because where the pull quote was before it made the quote look like a title instead.
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