Advert Mock up – Feedback

This is our first mock up of our advert. We feel like this is a good first mock up as it gives a clear idea of what we need to produce when we come to digitally drawing up our product. We asked around and got some feedback so we could set ourselves some targets.

• Put ‘out now’ underneath ‘island’.
• Fill the gap between the review and the website.
• Centre the picture a bit more.
• Fill the outside edges.

Obviously this is our very first draft, so we still have a lot to do but these targets we have set are going to help us to produce our advert very well and give the audience a clear understanding of what we are trying to produce.