After getting my result back for my shawshank redemption essay and reading the feedback I made a few errors and also a few good points.
what I could improve upon after reading the feedback:
- Use TEAS and to try and strucutre it in a thematic way, rather than doing it in chronological order.
- always analyse each example with key points.
- when describing the story always link it back to the key themes and the context.
After looking at the feedback when I do my next essay I will focus on giving examples with some key points. And rather than making my essay in chronilogical order, I will need to relate it to a particular subject. Also when describing the story I need to always link it back to the question and the key themes.