Draft 4

This is our draft 4 this contains all of the edits and feedback that we were given from our draft 3 feedback, this includes changing the titles to be bigger and also moving some of them to different places as to make it seem more professional, we also cut some of the angels at the end of the thriller as it didn’t come out as we originally intended it to.

 

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