Targets
Front cover
- Masthead bigger – ‘P’ needs to be enlarged to catch attention of readers quicker when magazine is on the shelf
- Capital ‘i’ in independent
- Put the word ‘TOP’ in a different colour – red to match colour scheme?
Contents
- Add red somewhere else on the page – lower down where it is scarce
- Align cover lines
- Make line spacing the same on all cover lines
- Check good English – ‘tells behind the scenes’ ?
- Don’t overdose on the word ‘tells’
- Apostrophe on ‘editors’
- Try moving the editor’s note around – provocative photo so maybe cover a bit of it?
- Put the name of the artist somewhere around or on the album cover
- One of the lines surrounding ‘CONTENTS’ put into red to match colour scheme?
Double page spread
- Paragraphs in the article – needs more space – overwhelming for reader
- Spotify logo on the ‘Mirrors’ box
- Large gap on the bottom right – move the photo down?
- Quotes in article – longer third quote? add another small one? rearrange?
- Bring in some red – match the colour scheme of the magazine
- Main quote under headline – make it the same blue as ‘Prodigy’