We shot our narrative on the grounds at saumarez park. In the performance shoot I was the only person who was featured, however for this shoot we had another person.

What went well:

• The scenery was perfect and helped us to reinforce the mes, as well as highlighting the storyline.
• We got some really good, detailed shots from a variety of different angles
• We got a variety of different scenes and all of the footage is in focus so there is no need to reshoot, like we had to do with the performance
• The outfits that the stars both wore were good and help to convey their transition from plain to punk

What could be improved:

• In one particular scene when I removed the magazine from my face to reveal my outfit change I didn’t completely remove the magazine from the shot so you can’t see my full outfit
• In the background of one of the shots you could see our bags and clothes which isn’t very appealing
• The storyline, is slightly unclear and we need to work on our story