Here is our 2nd draft for our digipak. Some of the changes we have made include adding inside panes, changing the placement of the album name and encourparating the artists name on the front cover.

Screen casifitify of our teacher giving us feedback:

Improvements to be made for our next draft:

• Change the font of ‘Annabelle Anduga’ on the front cover
• Inlcude the name of the title ‘Melodrama’ on the back cover
• The colour pallette for the inside page is too bland- more colour is needed
• More shaping and layering needs to be done on the inside page

Personally, I agree with all of the advice that the teacher has given us. I feel as though going forward with our next draft I want to work on the inside page in partucilar because I think that it looks too plain and a pop of colour and some better editing would make it so much better.