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As displayed above here is the second draft of my double page spread. Despite preferring this version of my DPS, I have made some changes that I am not 100% sure about. For example, I can’t tell if I like the additional transparent box I put behind Charlie M’s name in the title
What is new?
- The transparent pink box behind Charlie M’s name in the title
- I’ve changed the font used in the paragraphs
- Added boxes behind the paragraphs to make it more legible
- Changed where I positioned Charlie M’s quote, changed the font, colour, text size and placed it in a box to make it stand out more
- Added a page number
What is next?
- Change the font of the page number to ensure it is the same font as I’ve used on the other page numbers in my magazine
- Move the circle that I have put Charlie M’s quote in, further back so you cannot see the outline of the circle in the top corner
- Fill any empty spaces on the second page
- Read through my article, fix any spelling mistakes and put any quotations in bold