Music Video – Draft 1

Once we had performed our re-shoot of the narrative we took to our rough cut and replaced and moved a majority of the narrative, inserting the new clips. We also edited the performance to include a variety of more shots and changed the pacing of the cuts.

Without the feedback which we received for previous rough cuts it would not have been possible for us to edit the music video in the way we did, we as a group are more satisfied with this version of the music video.

However, we wish to collect feedback for this draft too as we feel there are still areas which we could change and improve upon before creating our final music video. We will pitch our draft to the target audience to get the best results for our feedback.

To see our first draft with new narrative, watch the video below.