The masthead is fairly proportioned and it looks quite unique, the bright pink colour stands out and attracts the audience. To make this masthead better I need to make it larger. The model is framed well and centred on the page but the quality is bad which i’ll fix in my second draft. Guitar leaning to the left looks quite good as the original photo had the guitar leaning to the right. In my next draft I will need to make my model bigger and more centered so that my front page can look adequate. Desktop publishing indesign has been used well to layout the text and image so that they convey the genre of psychedelic rock music.
The spacing between text isn’t to my liking and neither are some of the fonts on my cover-lines, I will change this in my second draft. The trippy psychedelic colours of pink, blue, red, white and black fit perfectly with the genre of psychedelic rock. I have used these colours in my image as well as my text so that they work together. The fonts i’ve used work well with the genre but i’m not sure on having the black highlighted by blue on “ Voted best artist.”
Originally we had a good costume but after the editing and blending of two images in photoshop, you can’t see what colour his T shirt originally was. But we had a good costume which resembled the genre of psychedelic rock. The language in my text is good as I have some superlatives, this helps attract the reader and draws a sense of importance to the magazine. The magazine is clearly a magazine as it has most of the conventional features a masthead, a pug, cover lines and a main cover star. In my next draft I need to add to make my work adequate by adding main cover lines, price and an issue date. Photoshop has been used well to edit image but it is too blurry and needs re-doing.