Here is draft 3 of our music video which has been peer assessed by a former student in another media class.

Peer review pros summarised

• We had good MES as the background suited the genre very well
• This shot is really well executed
• Tracking  is good in the bus stop shot
• we had a good variety of angles and shots in our music video
• The narrative in the music video is clear
• Good realistic performance

Peer review cons summarised

• work on editing the lip syncing on beat
• Get rid of blank bits as the narrative needs a conclusion
• To many shaky shots don’t add them or fix them
• Shot of the xbox doesn’t need to be there