Targets from teacher summarised
- Don’t use 2021 add the publisher logo
- make spines different colour
- Concept is good
- Scale Ben bigger
- Ambient dreams comes down and use the yellow from T shirt
- Use better picture of Brandon
- Ben has glasses Brandon has hat
- Change font
- Make middle look more cartoony
- Toilet, crisp packets for theme of concept art
- put dull yellow as spines
By analysing this feedback will help me to improve my next draft of my digipak.