We got feedback from our peers. They watched our old draft 3 and gave us feedback on ways we could improve in all areas (sound, titles, transitions, shots e.t.c.).

Strengths

  • Good variety of shots (low angles e.t.c)
  • Good use of transitions between shots and titles.
  • Good use of sounds
  • Good Mise en Sene

Targets 

  • Make sense of the use of knife
  • Get rid of one of the doors so that it doesn’t confuse people.
  • Add more mystery to the ending of the opening. Maybe using a phone beeping.