This is our presentation to pitch to our teacher

This is our video of the verbal feedback we were given.

Feedback summary

Positives

+ We had a developed character idea that has a good backstory and is not going to be a problem to portray by our model.

+The song being a message that he is trying to engage with. Allows our group to be creative with how he keeps being rejected and how she keeps missing the message.

+Our location ideas are able to be easily depicted, our lighthouse setting is representing their romance.

Negatives

-We need to narrow down our ideas as we have got too many to be able to clearly present in less than two minutes.

-Characters only having two friends each to illuminate the over complex ideas and this also allows us to be more precise and organised.

-The narrative and performance both need to be cut to avoid us having too much to do.