Draft 2

Below I have embedded all for of our panes for the second draft of our digipak. We have made some changes which were needed to be able to make this look as professional as possible.

Front cover

Inside page (left)

Inside page (right)

Back Cover

Some of the changes we made were that we added some effects to the back cover such as an outer glow to the image of the eye and the album name. We also put the spines of the digipak on the back cover as we previously had put one on the front page. These are only some of the improvements we have made and i’m there will be more to come.

Teachers Screencastify:

Above I have embedded the screen castify that my teacher created to give us feedback on our first draft so we were able to listen to it and take it into consideration when creating our second draft. This was a very useful thing to do as we were to see what we had done well so far and be able to have another persons perspective on what we had done so far to be able to make the most effective improvements for our second and even third draft.

Targets for improvement:

• We need to re cut out our star image on our front cover in Adobe Photoshop as the hair isn’t cut out as precisely as it needs to be.
• Add more textures into the background of the front cover instead of the standard colours we used.