This is feedback on draft three of our thriller. The feedback is on sound and visual.
The majority of our feedback was very positive and they thought that our thriller was very effective and challenged everyday stereotypes.
Mrs Cobb felt that when Morgan is walking in the courtyard we cannot hear his footsteps. To correct this we have added some in and enhanced them. We have also increased the volume of the music at points of high tension this enhances the tension of the scene. Every target that has been mentioned has been resolved.
Leave a Reply