Once we uploaded our first draft of our thriller we asked our peers to access our work and give constructive criticism on what it is that we need to do in order to improve our thriller. From this task we have been able too comprise a list of things that we need to do in order to improve our thriller.

Firstly we need to delete the repeated shot that is included. Secondly we need to make the scene going from the field to the steps a little less abrupt as it can be seen as confusing.

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