After looking at what improvements need to be made for my double page spread, I made further adjustments to improve it. After collecting my feedback that’s written below, I have completed each one to make my double paged spread better and more professional.

What’s new…

• Centre the quote.
• I moved him to the left a bit and made him bigger.
• Got rid of hyphens.
• Added graphics – I added the orange line to add depth.
• The headline had to be something about him – for this I used a quote of what he said.
• I made Metro indie small and put it in the corner at the top.
• Submitted my article for feedback.
• I also edited the cover star on photoshop to improve the quality of the image.

For my next draft of the double paged spread I will improve it from looking at the feedback below.

What’s next…

• make him bigger
• more article or have another photo of a quote in the middle so that you wrap the text around it
• centre the questions
• have some other coloured lines in there i.e. graphics to make the copy more exciting to look at
• caption the photo – i.e. Courcy so that we know who he is and that the article will relate to him