These were the targets I set for myself, I used them to improve my magazine.

What’s new…

• I Added more headlines – “the drama in making ‘youth,’ All new exclusive artists and albums fins out more in this magazine.”
• I Edited the image more on photoshop.
• I made sure the cover lines are catchy.
• consider and make more layouts – I experimented with this but preferred the original layout.
• Cut out the model more precisely – I decided to change the contrast of this image and made the background black to make him stand out.

What’s next…

• lighten the photo?
• another cover line at least on the left and one on the right?
• make metro indie…bigger, taller, thicker?
• capital letter September
• make him bigger so that some more of his hair goes behind the masthead