Positive Feedback:

• Likes the simple performance idea
• Likes the idea of an ending where the character in the narrative breaks free
• Likes the locations chosen e.g underground hospital and vale castle
• Likes the use of different models to portray the performance and narrative
• Like the simple narrative idea of being trapped and trying to get out
• Likes the idea of the sheets to symbolically show the narrative

 

Negative Feedback:

• It will be difficult to make the performance interesting and engaging with just the black studio and some lights so we have to make sure that the performer is very expressive
• Use three locations for the narrative
• Could used a storage container so imply being trapped
• Could use a spiders web made out of tights to symbolically represent being trapped
• Develop the idea of having an ending more
• Could try the steps idea