This is my second draft for my double page spread. I used the feedback given for my first draft and made changes to make it more conventional and appealing.
WHAT’S NEW:
- New star image and edited it to fade out
- Changed background colour
- Changed layout of article numbers
- New article font
- Added a small list to fill space
- Moved standfirst and flipped it
- Made ‘Dark October’ all orange
- Changed page numbers
- Added a quote onto the star image
- Put whole article on the right side of the DPS.
- Added photography credits
- Put the conclusion in it’s own box
WHAT’S NEXT:
- Enlarge the main photo
- Italics for the quote
- Look at copy line spacing in the standfirst – justify to right and left?
- Centre the quotes?
- The gap in the middle?
- Add some depth to the box at the bottom
- Are all the numbers the same opacity
- Inset photo feels too wide?
- Make some of the hits names slightly bigger
- Page numbers are usually at the bottom left and right