This is the screencastify feedback for our draft 2 of our music video. I was very satisfied with the feedback given as it was fairly complimentary and it outlined the areas that needed work which I agreed with. There was no criticism that I though was out of order. From this feedback I have set targets for improvement and what went well.
STRENGTHS:
- Editing on beat was good and works well
- Good use of close ups to help engage with the star
- Closing scene is good and ties up narrative
TARGETS:
- Performance needs editing or re filming to make it more energetic as it doesn’t fit with narrative
- Need to film some pickup clips as narrative is missing scenes
- Need to fill a blank clip where the beat changes.