This is the screencastify feedback for our draft 2 of our music video. I was very satisfied with the feedback given as it was fairly complimentary and it outlined the areas that needed work which I agreed with. There was no criticism that I though was out of order. From this feedback I have set targets for improvement and what went well.

STRENGTHS:

• Editing on beat was good and works well
• Good use of close ups to help engage with the star
• Closing scene is good and ties up narrative

TARGETS:

• Performance needs editing or re filming to make it more energetic as it doesn’t fit with narrative
• Need to film some pickup clips as narrative is missing scenes
• Need to fill a blank clip where the beat changes.