Screencastify Teacher Feedback – Draft 2

Summary of feedback:

• Good opening – make it slightly longer by slowing the clip of Eve looking at camera.
• Good edit with flipping the two shots of Eve with the microphone
• Nice range of locations
• Make the shot of Eve even more off center to appear intentional
• Brighten background in studio – make colours pop
• Put a block colour on the extreme close up of lips

Targets for improvement:

• Fix lip sync near start as it’s out of time
• Match on action slightly too slow – make edit faster
• Play with scale of positioning
• Overall colour correction to make everthing brighter
• More intimate shots wih movement through the frame in performance shots