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Summary of feedback:
- Good opening – make it slightly longer by slowing the clip of Eve looking at camera.
- Good edit with flipping the two shots of Eve with the microphone
- Nice range of locations
- Make the shot of Eve even more off center to appear intentional
- Brighten background in studio – make colours pop
- Put a block colour on the extreme close up of lips
Targets for improvement:
- Fix lip sync near start as it’s out of time
- Match on action slightly too slow – make edit faster
- Play with scale of positioning
- Overall colour correction to make everthing brighter
- More intimate shots wih movement through the frame in performance shots
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