Things that have changed:

• we added more effects such as:
  • the rotation effect
  • the glitch effect/vr effect
  • the inverted glitch effect
  • more circles over shots of dancing
  • the pulse effect
  • the echo effect
• made the flashback effect more obvious by changing the colour and adding a pulse
• we have added multiple clips on top of each other to create split screens to add interest on screen
• faster pace of edit – we are able to see more shots of her getting annoyed etc
• zoomed into facial expressions to get the more intense shots
• put the clips in chronological order so the sequencing makes more sense
• slowed down the emerging from the black bath
• added a VR effect on the montage of becoming the goth in order to create a more angsty atmosphere
• zoomed in on high angle to create the intensity
• made the reflection in the glasses fit better and is now more obvious to the audience

Comments about our video from our peers:

Targets for Improvement:

• more close ups of hands moving
• add transitions
• zoom in on some clips to get more personal
• add colour correction adjustment layer to make all clips look the same
• make goth clips darker and more atmospheric to highlight the change in mood