Here is my second draft of my magazine:

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Above is my full draft of my final magazine. I think that the improvements that I have made have been successful in conveying the pop genre. Improvements I have made include:

• Front page:
  • moved the headline ‘Gabe’ and the pug with ‘Mia’ in down
  • moved ‘Mia’ to the left and flip image changing places with ’20 perfect pop hits’
  • added colour to the pugs that fit with the colour schemes

• Contents page:
  • centred the text under ‘The Bucketlist’
  • made polaroid insets bigger
  • added colour to the main image

• Double-page spread:
  • made one headline bigger than the other to clarify which one is the main headline
  • made headline more catchy
  • moved ‘Hannah Oaks’ to the bottom of the left page
  • put drop capital at the start of the article not the standfirst
  • changed the background colour – too much blue
    • added pink box behind article
    • added blue corners on pink box
  • put my main image in a polaroid picture allowing the article headline to go at the top and ‘Hannah Oaks xox’ to go at the bottom as if she was signing off
  • added ‘sssshhh!’ around the edge of the page to link in with the idea of secrets
  • put song titles in blue instead of white in article
  • added another pull quote bottom left and moved original pull quote up to the right
  • added three insets of polaroid pictures