Here is my second draft for my music magazine front cover based around emo rap. below I have include a peer assessment of this draft so that i can improve the product further. As well as what I did differently to this draft.

what is different:

• I photoshopped her eye lips and design on her shirt to give the image more depth and represent her bolder than before.
• I changed the Masthead size and font to make it stand out more as well as making it more eye catching to the consumer.
• As well as adding more content such as pugs.

peer as

mast head bigger

main cover line should be Grace yates has ‘nothing left to prove’ and look at line spacing and perhaps a different font for Grace yates

one more cover line under the famous one

make the 3 on the right hand side make sense

issue and price etc.

make the skin tone slightly less flushed?

make her bigger