This is my 3rd content page draft after changing the previous draft to suit better the the intentions of advertising thought previous peer assessments.
WHATS NEW:
I change the # and the masthead around to make more appalling to the audience.
I added her name and who took the image to the bottom right side on the page for reference.
I changed the front of the number to standout more as well as fit the page design.
Lastly I changed the grammar an most of the contents titles as they there didn’t make sense or were to long for the boxes even/
Peer assessment: