Overall, I got 19/28 marks, which I think is pretty good, at least as a first proper essay. To improve, I’d say I need to make more references to the rest of the film, talking more about the themes of disobedience in the face of fascism. I would have also liked to have made more references to film elements within the text. Overall, though, I think the essay turned out relatively well and I think I can improve in these ways next time.